By David Ettinger
“Brief” Writing
Being a newspaper journalist for just under 20 years, I understand the concept of being limited to a specific word count and trying to cram as much detail into that limited space as possible.
As a blogger, I also try to keep things short, limiting myself to 750 words, unless content absolutely dictates more. There is much to be said about writing as briefly as possible.
Great Writing Advice
The idea of brevity crosses over creative lines, and for me, I received my greatest writing advice from one of the all-time great movie directors of American cinema.
Back in 1998, the American Film Institute named its 100 all-time greatest American films, its findings televised in an entertaining 3-hour program featuring interviews with some of the industry’s greatest figures.
Among them was the brilliant director Steven Spielberg, who was asked to comment on the No. 2 movie on the list, the magnificent Casablanca. Naturally, Spielberg focused on the film’s director, the prolific Michael Curtiz, who helmed more than 150 pictures!
While speaking of Curtiz, Spielberg praised him this way (paraphrase): “Michael Curtiz knew exactly when to get into a scene, and exactly when to get out of a scene.”
Struck!
As soon as Spielberg uttered those words, I was struck. Spielberg was basically saying that Curtiz wasted no second of film on anything that did not advance the story. Curtiz never shot filler or unneeded dialog. His films were tight, concise, and free from superfluous content.
As a journalist trained to do the same, this impressed me to no end! Though I had this down pat in the articles I wrote for my newspaper, I did not do so in my Christian articles for the magazine Zion’s Fire (with whom I have now been writing for 32 years). I was granted far more “space” there than I was at the newspaper, and took full advantage of it – writing more than was necessary to make my point.
Trimming the Fat!
As I made the 45-minute drive to work the next day, I thought about Spielberg’s comment regarding Curtiz and told myself, “From now on, you need to trim the fat! You need to get into your point quickly, make the point, and get out of it. No excessive lead-in, no over-explanation, only that which is needed.”
Ever since that night, I have made every effort to be as concise as possible in my writing, making my introductions brief, saying only that of the main point which needs to be said, and then moving on! I try to be brisk and engrossing, just like a tightly-written movie.
It is up to my readers to determine how well I succeed, but I have taken Spielberg’s advice to heart: Get in and get out!
If any of you have a particular writing philosophy you adhere to, I would love to hear it! Feel free to comment.
Andy Oldham
April 23, 2022
Great advice, David!
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dettinger47
April 23, 2022
Thank you, Andy.
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mrrjchamberlain88
April 23, 2022
Hi David,
I totally agree.
I think the Bible illustrates your point perfectly: epic yes, but not a superfluous word!
As you know, I myself blog succinctly to the point of bring overly formulaic with my four paragraphs and a prayer, but I really enjoy your writing style: short and sweet 🙂
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dettinger47
April 23, 2022
Thank you. Appreciate it!
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mrsmariposa2014
April 23, 2022
Ooh, Casablanca is one of my favorites.🙂 Each scene was so well executed. Curtiz was indeed an excellent director. As to my writing…oh, my. Not sure that precise is a great word to describe it. I struggle to trim fat at times. The urge to overexplain is strong in me. 🙄 But, mostly, I guess I could say that I strive for purposeful, as well as fairly conversational. And often, I must admit, I am fond of inserting much wordplay and intentional flouting of conventions when it seems to suit. I always read through out loud to listen for a flow. If it feels off, I comb through. That is usually the longest part of the process for me as I can get rather persnickety. 😁 Fun topic. Thanks for this, David. Got my brain on something different for a bit.
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dettinger47
April 23, 2022
Great feedback, Marisa. Reading your writing out loud is definitely a plus!
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bigskybuckeye
April 24, 2022
Thank you David. You offer great advice to any writer. Just as Spielberg states, many times less is more. Back in my teaching days, I taught some journalistic writing. It was rewarding to see students adapt their writing to this style.
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dettinger47
April 24, 2022
Less is more. Well said, Big Sky.
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Tom
April 24, 2022
Excellent advice, David. I try to keep my posts at around 500 words and try not to meander (too much) from the main point of the post. I appreciate your posts, they’re easy to follow and hold my attention. As bloggers/writers, we can use some advice from a pro.
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dettinger47
April 24, 2022
I appreciate that, Tom. Another thing I wanted to add to the blog, but thought it best not to write, was that generally, most of us have things to do other than read blogs.
When I open a blog and it seems to run on and on, I just glimpse it and move on. I’m much more prone to stick with a blog which is short.
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Tom
April 25, 2022
RE: posts running on and on
Yup, if I see that another bloggers post is very long I also tend to skim through it.
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seekingdivineperspective
April 24, 2022
I struggle to keep my posts around 1000 words. – I’m probably trying to say too much.
On the other hand, the stories my middle school students wrote were TOO SHORT. They told what happened, period. I tried to get them to “take us there” and give details – what did it look like? Sound like? Smell like? etc. So, I would say it depends on what kind of writing, and what you’re trying to accomplish. Just making a point, or creating an experience?
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dettinger47
April 25, 2022
Definitely. Much depends on the kind of blog. Yours are more story-like, and therefore require a bit more to achieve your objectives. Good points!
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Stuart Danker
July 15, 2022
As an underwriter, I have trouble meeting word counts, but I chalk that up to brevity. To be fair though, it feels so satisfying to chop my first drafts by 30%, and to pore over each sentence, trying to find a more succinct alternative. Anyway, thanks for this post!
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dettinger47
July 15, 2022
Good writing insights. Appreciate the feedback, Stuart.
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